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thanks for the avatar. he's Beholder an he's going to be my mascot in my future art blog!
While there's a lot of great stuff happening with her hair, the upper portion of the drawing has no movement so the eye gets stuck there. You have a slight halo around the waxing and waning moons, if that was carried in a light arc around her head following the moons,it would help carry the viewer through that part of the drawing and back down.Also, the little fir trees on her head need a slight punch on color to give them volume. A saturated green with a bit of red mixed in it, or even a violet would bring out that really great soft yellow glow on the left side of them and give them more believable volume (the sane kind you've got on the woman's face). I also think that the owls in the lower most portion could pick up that same color punch just to give a stronger sense of the light source coming down because it is seperate from the pattern in her hair